tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post3016600637819006232..comments2024-02-19T21:01:43.522+01:00Comments on Tales of autumn: Poem: Smoke, fog and hazeNatašekhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-11734824917630456762018-03-18T20:51:20.041+01:002018-03-18T20:51:20.041+01:00Informative article, totally what I needed.Informative article, totally what I needed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-18725387114346846952015-05-05T16:44:48.700+02:002015-05-05T16:44:48.700+02:00very insightful.
ZQvery insightful.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-12359213317950539552015-05-05T15:19:59.523+02:002015-05-05T15:19:59.523+02:00Wonderful connection between the past not being ta...Wonderful connection between the past not being taken for granted and lessons needing to be learned Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-49727084825110107982015-05-05T01:17:44.154+02:002015-05-05T01:17:44.154+02:00Where indeed! Each stanza could stand alone, as a...Where indeed! Each stanza could stand alone, as a pondering of the human earthly experience. Nicely written!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-44718262071453918362015-05-04T23:53:24.849+02:002015-05-04T23:53:24.849+02:00Wonderful ... the quest for clarity beautifully ar...Wonderful ... the quest for clarity beautifully articulated.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-50507651382935364382015-05-04T17:31:08.383+02:002015-05-04T17:31:08.383+02:00The first stanza really grabbed me. I think I will...The first stanza really grabbed me. I think I will always be in a little bit of fog! Thanks for visiting my blog.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-2844135454406313572015-05-04T04:48:24.048+02:002015-05-04T04:48:24.048+02:00Reaching for the silver lining ... good reminder ...Reaching for the silver lining ... good reminder that sorrows have edges to move beyond.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-75726448103244109082015-05-04T03:54:21.195+02:002015-05-04T03:54:21.195+02:00it can cause lots of anxiety to know that fire can...it can cause lots of anxiety to know that fire can rekindle unexpectedly ;)<br /><br /><a href="https://zongrik.wordpress.com/2015/04/28/my-brain-is-a-cheap-gadget-that-spins/" rel="nofollow">My Brain is a Cheap Gadget That Spins</a>Tammyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13609172461325705463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-84695774779802496382015-05-04T01:19:30.482+02:002015-05-04T01:19:30.482+02:00I love those first three lines....what a beautiful...I love those first three lines....what a beautiful way to start a poem!!C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-57062570679948781772015-05-04T01:04:42.058+02:002015-05-04T01:04:42.058+02:00Love the form and the sentiment of choice in how o...Love the form and the sentiment of choice in how one views "the haze" of life ... LovelyDr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-70993286426120323802015-05-03T22:30:09.503+02:002015-05-03T22:30:09.503+02:00ah yes i like the theme of the fog lifting, for is...ah yes i like the theme of the fog lifting, for isnt that a metaphor of learning as we trek the path of life<br /><br />thanks for dropping in at my Sunday Lime, today<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-23195187891691421472015-05-03T22:30:08.528+02:002015-05-03T22:30:08.528+02:00First, I LOVE the way the clouds hang in the mount...First, I LOVE the way the clouds hang in the mountains that way - mesmerizing. This poem is lovely to read, and the ending is really satisfying. So well written, Natasa.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-75292945180091098722015-05-03T20:34:35.789+02:002015-05-03T20:34:35.789+02:00Nataša I felt the fog clouding me, keeping me from... Nataša I felt the fog clouding me, keeping me from seeing clearly, and sometimes treacherous as well as the smoke from fire both destroying and creating....how we are many times caught in this hazy moments unable to see clearly....but as you say at the end....<br /><br />' or can you see the stories emerging<br /> grand and filled with love<br /> from which a fresh start is given'<br /><br />Not all has to be lost in that fog and haze....we can emerge fresh....love this!Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-24853368570179786622015-05-03T19:43:55.396+02:002015-05-03T19:43:55.396+02:00This is beautifully and creatively written. Each ...This is beautifully and creatively written. Each stanza is so full of meaning, May the haze lift in all our lives. Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-56137860624425943802015-05-03T19:30:41.465+02:002015-05-03T19:30:41.465+02:00First I like the style in which this poem was writ...First I like the style in which this poem was written. We often have to find our way through fog and haze in the journey of life to see the vision clearly.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-15976115398341061602015-05-03T14:55:22.577+02:002015-05-03T14:55:22.577+02:00the imagery is so enchantingthe imagery is so enchantingSuyashJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06332045821743367072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-74114315817829460312015-05-03T14:24:05.822+02:002015-05-03T14:24:05.822+02:00Great and meaningful imagery in your poem, Nataša....Great and meaningful imagery in your poem, Nataša. There are times however when the fog lift and the clouds are blown away.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-24052804017171587062015-05-03T14:13:47.425+02:002015-05-03T14:13:47.425+02:00We all have fog and smoke in life, I think, but ho...We all have fog and smoke in life, I think, but hopefully we find ways of finding that clarity despite the haze!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-27877964146506439972015-05-03T13:45:19.760+02:002015-05-03T13:45:19.760+02:00Oh I loved how you used fog as imagery to depict f...Oh I loved how you used fog as imagery to depict feelings of uncertainty.. perhaps when the fog clears... so does our head.. and we are able to overcome obstacles in life :D<br /><br />Lots of love<br />xoxoSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-17429777976340154042015-05-03T13:20:55.724+02:002015-05-03T13:20:55.724+02:00I like the way you have set out each stanza, and d...I like the way you have set out each stanza, and developed both your theme and the metaphor.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-33530320967669558862015-05-03T12:17:36.340+02:002015-05-03T12:17:36.340+02:00Smoke, fog, clouds are all constantly changing jus...Smoke, fog, clouds are all constantly changing just as we are, seen but unseen and difficult to capture like our minds.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-87340534092028474152015-05-03T11:16:55.389+02:002015-05-03T11:16:55.389+02:00new lessons learnt through fog, smoke and haze do ...new lessons learnt through fog, smoke and haze do give us a fresh start...beautifully woven...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-1637683726814900102015-05-03T10:51:10.012+02:002015-05-03T10:51:10.012+02:00Definitely difficult to see the light of decision,...Definitely difficult to see the light of decision, in paths marked my obstructing fog and dangerous smoke. Better to be well equipped with hope and inspiration, just in case.<br /><br />Thought provoking!<br /><br />PoppyPoppyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08980323586402386609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-70300008803663636202015-05-03T10:46:33.958+02:002015-05-03T10:46:33.958+02:00There are so many barriers or irritations to cause...There are so many barriers or irritations to cause one to stumble in life! Very true Natasa!<br /><br />Hank<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-53777099145889543322015-05-03T09:02:04.168+02:002015-05-03T09:02:04.168+02:00The extended metaphor of fog and smoke really work...The extended metaphor of fog and smoke really works for how we are finding our way on life's path.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com