tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post4088464173905651473..comments2024-02-19T21:01:43.522+01:00Comments on Tales of autumn: Poem: Autumn in MadeiraNataĊĦekhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comBlogger39125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-32333844727740067132014-10-14T16:50:25.740+02:002014-10-14T16:50:25.740+02:00This is great. I like how you started off with a r...This is great. I like how you started off with a reference to the painting (treehouse, leaves) and then transition into thoughts about how to live life following what's in your heart. Well done.Justin Lambhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04540827237593614818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-88446199996769183732014-10-13T17:13:19.266+02:002014-10-13T17:13:19.266+02:00these three lines blew me away:
I know the world t...these three lines blew me away:<br />I know the world to be written in tragedies<br />but beauty of life shines through them<br />in all the seconds we getAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-33756745534983077292014-10-12T21:54:23.047+02:002014-10-12T21:54:23.047+02:00I came back for another read, kiddo, and get even ...I came back for another read, kiddo, and get even more out of it today, when I am less tired. Today the lines that speak to me are "I know the world to be written in tragedies but the beauty of life shines through them." This is true, and is what keeps us going in sad times - that more of those glorious, golden moments are up ahead, just waiting to happen to us again.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-13483092704973658562014-10-08T03:42:29.744+02:002014-10-08T03:42:29.744+02:00I'd like some time to ponder in such a tree ho...I'd like some time to ponder in such a tree house!~T~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17969562036638831748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-24365684413033910082014-10-08T02:05:51.763+02:002014-10-08T02:05:51.763+02:00Natasha, absolutely love this line. "I put my...Natasha, absolutely love this line. "I put my thoughts on the leaves<br />and watch them disappear". The whole poem is beautifully written :-)Saravhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10289212188617046645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-40608289245621504002014-10-07T15:23:42.716+02:002014-10-07T15:23:42.716+02:00absolutely beautiful!absolutely beautiful!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-3277077637513922562014-10-06T17:43:45.721+02:002014-10-06T17:43:45.721+02:00Beautiful poem. I love the thoughts in it as well...Beautiful poem. I love the thoughts in it as well as its final advice to devide our days in the things we believe in. It is so true - that's how we grow.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-13304714111527985432014-10-06T16:54:31.813+02:002014-10-06T16:54:31.813+02:00i'll have to say, your piece opens up a lot of...i'll have to say, your piece opens up a lot of magic and storybook elements one can write more similar poetry from. at least that's that what i felt while reading it.Nicholas https://www.blogger.com/profile/05252355730748268069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-12188684731864691232014-10-06T16:38:45.929+02:002014-10-06T16:38:45.929+02:00Beautifully executed and accomplished contemplatio...Beautifully executed and accomplished contemplation of time.<br /><br />ElizabethAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-79373540327374655832014-10-06T05:34:42.769+02:002014-10-06T05:34:42.769+02:00sounds like a lovely place to go to.. :)sounds like a lovely place to go to.. :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-64392539272473689892014-10-06T04:17:22.110+02:002014-10-06T04:17:22.110+02:00some really cool elements in this....the writing o...some really cool elements in this....the writing on the leaves....my fav part though is def the life of tragedies and seeing the light shine through them...a cool bit of truth in that....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-21374975898741126722014-10-06T03:27:03.562+02:002014-10-06T03:27:03.562+02:00Well written, "I put my thoughts on the leave...Well written, "I put my thoughts on the leaves" is so full of potential.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-25865173140529071612014-10-05T22:32:30.165+02:002014-10-05T22:32:30.165+02:00I put my thoughts on the leaves and watch them dis...I put my thoughts on the leaves and watch them disappear---really lovely!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-52757494983532855062014-10-05T22:27:18.988+02:002014-10-05T22:27:18.988+02:00Where to start with the love of these words....
&#...Where to start with the love of these words....<br />'shelter of tree trunks I create<br />a village where my soul becomes alive again'<br /><br />love it....<br /><br />and then, 'I put my thoughts on the leaves'....such beauty in these words.Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-61801233862462427492014-10-05T22:14:11.220+02:002014-10-05T22:14:11.220+02:00This brought back some stellar childhood memories....This brought back some stellar childhood memories. Just glorious!TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-89380732383445411272014-10-05T21:50:02.803+02:002014-10-05T21:50:02.803+02:00You are definitely on the right path...letting us ...You are definitely on the right path...letting us follow your words :-)<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-91452370171504047052014-10-05T21:04:06.897+02:002014-10-05T21:04:06.897+02:00luv your inspiration of Autumn in the following li...luv your inspiration of Autumn in the following lines<br /><br />"divide your days into the things<br />your heart believes in<br />and observe it grow"<br /><br />thanks for dropping in at my blog<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-55896887586544650772014-10-05T17:57:57.177+02:002014-10-05T17:57:57.177+02:00This is fantastic advice....especially "divid...This is fantastic advice....especially "divide your days into the things<br />your heart believes in and observe it grow." Great write, Natasa!<br />Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-73105488053540803392014-10-05T17:56:56.799+02:002014-10-05T17:56:56.799+02:00Somehow living in a tree house at the times of fal...Somehow living in a tree house at the times of fall would move us closer to the passing of the time..brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-50323530361819837322014-10-05T16:24:41.728+02:002014-10-05T16:24:41.728+02:00I love the idea,that the beauty will be shine thru...I love the idea,that the beauty will be shine thru the tragedy - this fullness so satisfied me, thank you! humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-57115492181147332872014-10-05T16:07:16.805+02:002014-10-05T16:07:16.805+02:00Love the tree house! ANd the leaves as a symbol o...Love the tree house! ANd the leaves as a symbol of impermanency. Carpe Diem!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-57053034430530903282014-10-05T15:53:13.848+02:002014-10-05T15:53:13.848+02:00I liked how you weaved the changes of autumn with ...I liked how you weaved the changes of autumn with a more personal approach. I also liked the idea that the heart can grow again once it has found a sheltered place.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-90626043742075710912014-10-05T14:21:45.312+02:002014-10-05T14:21:45.312+02:00I wish I can leave in a tree house and build a vil...I wish I can leave in a tree house and build a village where my soul becomes alive again ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-33245387021633425692014-10-05T13:24:28.306+02:002014-10-05T13:24:28.306+02:00So true that everything eventually does perish - t...So true that everything eventually does perish - the green leaves turn into orange leaves and then eventually they become part of the soil. But just as our lives go from green to orange to dust, yes sometime we can see our lives passing by, we have to make the most of each moment of beauty, dividing our days into the things we enjoy most, and know that even in those times of reflection and changing we can grow until we take our last breath!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-68106484592372838302014-10-05T12:25:29.646+02:002014-10-05T12:25:29.646+02:00A lovely lesson for all:)A lovely lesson for all:)Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.com