tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post4824334784441020403..comments2024-02-19T21:01:43.522+01:00Comments on Tales of autumn: Poem: Glass heartNatašekhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-11402715235368605182014-03-03T15:42:10.503+01:002014-03-03T15:42:10.503+01:00Your work nicely illustrates the photoYour work nicely illustrates the photoAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-24650511881298210552014-01-07T00:26:46.256+01:002014-01-07T00:26:46.256+01:00The glass metaphor is superb. I would love to see ...The glass metaphor is superb. I would love to see you continue it through every stanza.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-79775001670731688722013-07-29T14:29:42.770+02:002013-07-29T14:29:42.770+02:00I love the metaphor, this is gorgeous!I love the metaphor, this is gorgeous!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-2533248112683400592013-07-29T08:13:45.140+02:002013-07-29T08:13:45.140+02:00that's lovely...entwined.that's lovely...entwined. Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-77246660031925754292013-07-29T08:13:22.389+02:002013-07-29T08:13:22.389+02:00indeed, they are plentiful.. thank you :)indeed, they are plentiful.. thank you :)Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-85737299579349267522013-07-29T01:41:38.494+02:002013-07-29T01:41:38.494+02:00relationships can be tricky, aren't they?
a be...relationships can be tricky, aren't they?<br />a beautiful write, with an excellent ending. :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-30114309165406669822013-07-29T00:04:31.940+02:002013-07-29T00:04:31.940+02:00This is glorious. It brought to mind a couple conn...This is glorious. It brought to mind a couple connected through decades of life together...entwined.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-8756443975569982162013-07-28T23:40:17.472+02:002013-07-28T23:40:17.472+02:00:-)
ZQ:-)<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-65604082156489297952013-07-28T23:08:15.351+02:002013-07-28T23:08:15.351+02:00glad you do, thank you Sherry! :)glad you do, thank you Sherry! :)Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-77662287018819295312013-07-28T23:07:55.757+02:002013-07-28T23:07:55.757+02:00i'm glad it makes you feel that way.. :)i'm glad it makes you feel that way.. :)Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-64095467588060425012013-07-28T23:07:16.840+02:002013-07-28T23:07:16.840+02:00thank you Panchali :)thank you Panchali :)Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-15001914817761257262013-07-28T23:05:40.777+02:002013-07-28T23:05:40.777+02:00thank you Lisa :)thank you Lisa :)Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-41416499913402641302013-07-28T23:05:11.289+02:002013-07-28T23:05:11.289+02:00glad you do, and thanks.. have a good week brian.glad you do, and thanks.. have a good week brian.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-57183004615963267722013-07-28T23:04:12.473+02:002013-07-28T23:04:12.473+02:00thank you Mary :)thank you Mary :)Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-13344394339274437262013-07-28T20:10:28.615+02:002013-07-28T20:10:28.615+02:00Love how you express the ticking clock. Love how you express the ticking clock. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-55845202884461493252013-07-28T19:29:52.481+02:002013-07-28T19:29:52.481+02:00"We knew we were walking on fragile ground&qu..."We knew we were walking on fragile ground".......poignant. I so love the closing stanza......very lovely write!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-68102603057503626062013-07-28T18:53:36.661+02:002013-07-28T18:53:36.661+02:00I loved your poem. Particularly, the 2 moments, wh...I loved your poem. Particularly, the 2 moments, when you write the word breath. This is too compelling and beautiful that I could read this all day and feel like I have read a book which talks about a whole array of emotions.Anand S Unnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-52883497311893596872013-07-28T18:44:43.446+02:002013-07-28T18:44:43.446+02:00Beautiful lines, Natasha. A fine piece of writing…...Beautiful lines, Natasha. A fine piece of writing…:)Love this poem.Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-2145709440449454312013-07-28T18:03:18.320+02:002013-07-28T18:03:18.320+02:00"we become to weak to reply to the echoes we ..."we become to weak to reply to the echoes we leave behind in each other" amazing line, just love this poem.Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-34038001728887686552013-07-28T15:53:22.493+02:002013-07-28T15:53:22.493+02:00ah i like this much natasa...the glass heart, frag...ah i like this much natasa...the glass heart, fragile...can relate....the fogging up the glass and leaving fingerprints so they know where you came from, love that....the giving time for it to grow in your notebook while still sharing breath....cool intimacy.....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-79886897556686755072013-07-28T15:42:11.726+02:002013-07-28T15:42:11.726+02:00"I knocked gently on your glass heart" -..."I knocked gently on your glass heart" --such a beautiful line. There is love, fragility, and the realization that time continues to pass within the lines of your poem!! Another 'keeper' here.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-19981825842751635282013-06-23T19:56:45.719+02:002013-06-23T19:56:45.719+02:00"I give you time to fill the blank pages
in m..."I give you time to fill the blank pages<br />in my half-written notebook<br />and let my fingerprints paint in yours"<br /><br />Beautiful. Preeti S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08367363156339655332noreply@blogger.com