tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post6084767116496659165..comments2024-02-19T21:01:43.522+01:00Comments on Tales of autumn: Poem: Hungry mindNatašekhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-85540728548525446952013-12-20T10:23:58.858+01:002013-12-20T10:23:58.858+01:00an excellent question, and timely for me, too, Nat...an excellent question, and timely for me, too, Natasa ~ MAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-31831980174210885762013-12-17T02:07:45.421+01:002013-12-17T02:07:45.421+01:00Giddy-up! I hear you. :-)
ZQGiddy-up! I hear you. :-)<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-81903648380930902932013-12-16T21:42:16.342+01:002013-12-16T21:42:16.342+01:00Thoughtful work Natasa... With Best Wishes Scott w...Thoughtful work Natasa... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.comscotthastiepoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266153714529613752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-20029173173122558102013-12-16T17:33:57.092+01:002013-12-16T17:33:57.092+01:00I'm constantly anxious. Poetry writing has bee...I'm constantly anxious. Poetry writing has been taken up to change things. Let's hope it works. Pealogichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06369877267076357849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-30683972646901635732013-12-16T15:49:58.442+01:002013-12-16T15:49:58.442+01:00'The next moment
will slip by faster if you gi...'The next moment<br />will slip by faster if you give in to anxiety; but for the most part<br />worst case scenarios don't come true; they just feed<br />your fears, which in return cloud the skies<br />that you walk under.'<br /><br />The entire poem carried a strong message. Perhaps not the most artistic of your poems but certainly the one that carries a lot of thoughts. Keep it going. :)Anand S Unnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06000744958432605565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-73194220714623977752013-12-16T13:43:31.192+01:002013-12-16T13:43:31.192+01:00wow! a thought provoking piece of work.
i liked th...wow! a thought provoking piece of work.<br />i liked these :"<i>Ghosts of the past have long since whispered<br />in your ears, since you were eager to listen."</i><br />i was guilty of this at times, as seen in my recent post. :)dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-5872826410973316072013-12-15T23:57:43.847+01:002013-12-15T23:57:43.847+01:00The trying on of the day before trying it on is fa...The trying on of the day before trying it on is familiar--others' thoughts, past attempts, etc, all to drag out the time. Nicely done in great detail. Reminds me of Caesar's "A coward dies many times before his death ..."Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-88778454189818685092013-12-15T21:35:01.225+01:002013-12-15T21:35:01.225+01:00sometimes lessons of the past are the eyes of tomo...sometimes lessons of the past are the eyes of tomorrow... well crafted poem with much to think about...revelationshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07184644795582553870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-68150192634501919582013-12-15T20:32:05.448+01:002013-12-15T20:32:05.448+01:00Lots of wisdom tucked in every line, Nataša. I...Lots of wisdom tucked in every line, Nataša. I'm the master of worrying over things and the things I worry about never come to pass...instead something not yet worried about will rear its ugly head. I loved this piece. It's beautiful.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-75023975130197607992013-12-15T18:43:28.835+01:002013-12-15T18:43:28.835+01:00This is a profoundly insightful poem, Natasa. I es...This is a profoundly insightful poem, Natasa. I especially noted the "possible future at your back" and the "gazing ahead to the past". Your closing question is key. Fantastic write!!!!!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-22193337069193369192013-12-15T17:07:34.225+01:002013-12-15T17:07:34.225+01:00i like this chain of thoughts and the conflicts......i like this chain of thoughts and the conflicts....Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-56210400018926985062013-12-15T15:36:11.214+01:002013-12-15T15:36:11.214+01:00Very thought-provoking piece, Natasá! "If not...Very thought-provoking piece, Natasá! "If not now, then when,<br />will it be a good time to feed the hunger for change?" - a very good question indeed and a great way to close your poem.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-68973447583737385152013-12-15T14:46:53.075+01:002013-12-15T14:46:53.075+01:00I love the prose question style of writing of some...I love the prose question style of writing of someone's head ~ The past can be a powerful chain and clouds the sky of the future wanting to be change ~ Enjoyed this one ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-87961373803464006872013-12-15T14:03:53.885+01:002013-12-15T14:03:53.885+01:00Reading this was like looking through the window i...Reading this was like looking through the window into someone's private world. The rhetorical questions are very pertinent - surely they have been asked by countless generations searching for the meaning in the every day.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-27019626271684065262013-12-15T13:39:58.977+01:002013-12-15T13:39:58.977+01:00I like this, Natasa. I agree about the 'worst ...I like this, Natasa. I agree about the 'worst case scenarios.' They usually do not happen. But those ghosts of the past CAN indeed haunt a person!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-64576608082768059602013-12-15T13:30:51.311+01:002013-12-15T13:30:51.311+01:00I loved the title, the picture, and adored the poe...I loved the title, the picture, and adored the poem! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-41742829666487149732013-12-15T11:42:35.226+01:002013-12-15T11:42:35.226+01:00at christmas this is the best time to forget all t...at christmas this is the best time to forget all the troubles and start doing do for a change, lovely thoughts from a thoughtful heart .jossinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02040156091826428990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-70573016059291433112013-12-15T11:10:22.842+01:002013-12-15T11:10:22.842+01:00I know this statement is well often used(overly) b...I know this statement is well often used(overly) but still I would remark that your words resonated with me. :-)<br />Gazing into the past, taking a lesson and living the moment which is now and carve a new future- that is what I am striving to do myself.<br />Beautifully penned. And I especially liked that last statement/question.<br />-HAAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-46630911099810102102013-12-14T19:52:14.288+01:002013-12-14T19:52:14.288+01:00love that quote...something to live by for sure.love that quote...something to live by for sure.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-59217066284261175352013-12-14T19:12:38.912+01:002013-12-14T19:12:38.912+01:00Excellent. Really excellent. In defines my feeling...Excellent. Really excellent. In defines my feeling of staying behind in a Europe winter. Or of quote I've read of, written on a travelling fridge: "Life is a mystery to be lived, not a problem to be solved."Travelinhttp://www.goodreads.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-61396654085539889632013-12-14T15:38:19.484+01:002013-12-14T15:38:19.484+01:00gazing ahead into the past and then leave it witho...gazing ahead into the past and then leave it without falling into regret...that is def an inspired line.....the hanging of thoughts they stole on the wall to see if they fit was very cool as well natasa...hope you are well and have a great holiday season...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com