tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post7275799083594374643..comments2024-02-19T21:01:43.522+01:00Comments on Tales of autumn: Poem: Bird in the cageNatašekhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-39594600391995022592013-12-06T08:53:09.571+01:002013-12-06T08:53:09.571+01:00That first stanza was so wonderful. The way the po...That first stanza was so wonderful. The way the poem unfolded was quite the showMichaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18164471310146247950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-27464746954397868082013-08-16T00:08:26.263+02:002013-08-16T00:08:26.263+02:00I like that finding a teardrop, full of meaning ~ ...I like that finding a teardrop, full of meaning ~ Lovely share ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-35726380710519857522013-08-13T15:40:13.328+02:002013-08-13T15:40:13.328+02:00:-):-)ZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-15690363533844034372013-08-12T17:45:30.241+02:002013-08-12T17:45:30.241+02:00So incredibly powerful! I can't even begin to ...So incredibly powerful! I can't even begin to tell you what this meant to me. Dances With Vodkahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17826849421762801692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-29503569797183870532013-08-12T16:36:37.544+02:002013-08-12T16:36:37.544+02:00So very dreamy and compassionate! Reading this was...So very dreamy and compassionate! Reading this was time well spent! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-83836783997782935222013-08-12T16:04:49.762+02:002013-08-12T16:04:49.762+02:00a moving and lovely piece of work. the closing lin...a moving and lovely piece of work. the closing lines are so strong.<br />i liked the title too, a very good metaphor. <br />dsnake1http://dsnake1.blogspot.sg/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-89171784084946577802013-08-12T00:34:57.826+02:002013-08-12T00:34:57.826+02:00Natasha,
A most sensitive and thought evoking poe...Natasha,<br /><br />A most sensitive and thought evoking poem, written with a testing interlude along the journey of life. Excellent...<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-65707019376380878652013-08-11T20:05:16.775+02:002013-08-11T20:05:16.775+02:00indeed Mary, it is one of those.. I had the beginn...indeed Mary, it is one of those.. I had the beginning lines down for a month, but it took one night, where my mind drifted and the words flew. thank you!Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-13227306736653283232013-08-11T20:04:06.587+02:002013-08-11T20:04:06.587+02:00more and more people are faced with it.. but to ha...more and more people are faced with it.. but to have like a hundred operations?! that's... takes courage.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-17568728603236894092013-08-11T19:00:09.322+02:002013-08-11T19:00:09.322+02:00A very strong and beautiful piece.A very strong and beautiful piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-70348820965701389532013-08-11T18:35:13.857+02:002013-08-11T18:35:13.857+02:00"like fallen stars, graciously cold"......."like fallen stars, graciously cold"....so beautiful, Natasa, this poem........"I'll remember your name". Yes, you should find Women Who Run With the Wolves in your library - it is a wonderful read!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-48129201689987159622013-08-11T18:07:18.199+02:002013-08-11T18:07:18.199+02:00extremely moving poem...agonizing too.very well wr...extremely moving poem...agonizing too.very well written.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-32505514165344594562013-08-11T18:06:12.185+02:002013-08-11T18:06:12.185+02:00So tender, speaks of the gentle spirit helping one...So tender, speaks of the gentle spirit helping one as they battle such difficult things. Just beautiful!Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-80873706894373018102013-08-11T15:44:21.480+02:002013-08-11T15:44:21.480+02:00
my fingertips found a teardrop
under my skin....<br /> my fingertips found a teardrop<br /> under my skin................. <br /> so moving.<br /> <br />Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-12744921434587097962013-08-11T15:25:20.993+02:002013-08-11T15:25:20.993+02:00This is a sweet and tender and lovely way to encou...This is a sweet and tender and lovely way to encounter, face and get to love and accept taht all taht's ours ...ours is.<br /><br />Greatly done<br />thank youDulcehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08109609856487463466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-71597943635786587422013-08-11T15:16:32.123+02:002013-08-11T15:16:32.123+02:00Illness or aging, in my case aging, conjures up mo...Illness or aging, in my case aging, conjures up more premonitions with passing years. The closing is particularly moving for me. Enjoyed.LaTonya Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17837979981517423142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-13188411458125666782013-08-11T14:17:10.045+02:002013-08-11T14:17:10.045+02:00Natasa, I have read poems of yours week after week...Natasa, I have read poems of yours week after week; and this one is 'top of my list' I think. Very powerful, moving, real. The message just flows. I picture that this might have been one of those poems that kind of wrote itself, as it just seems to move so naturally. Very sad though. One which will stay with me.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-2053895683162356542013-08-11T14:02:06.621+02:002013-08-11T14:02:06.621+02:00the teardrop under the skin cells made of you....r...the teardrop under the skin cells made of you....really cool lines...this builds really well toward a nice crescendo...the swimming in the ocean, remembering the name is a great close....cancer has touched my family greatly, my father has had over 100 operations....my uncle, my cousin...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-58161536983374822152013-08-11T13:57:07.830+02:002013-08-11T13:57:07.830+02:00Hauntingly beautiful,the flow is greatHauntingly beautiful,the flow is greatAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-38152104784942377072013-08-11T10:44:07.783+02:002013-08-11T10:44:07.783+02:00Premonitions are fearful monsters. Keep a song in ...Premonitions are fearful monsters. Keep a song in your heart and walk by the shadows.Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-48953993879321700902013-08-11T10:38:24.570+02:002013-08-11T10:38:24.570+02:00it touches the heart.it touches the heart.Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-41198360348964521972013-08-11T08:55:37.569+02:002013-08-11T08:55:37.569+02:00so sorry to hear that...may she win the battle, an...so sorry to hear that...may she win the battle, and may you be there with her.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-86909541339925855302013-08-11T05:48:56.455+02:002013-08-11T05:48:56.455+02:00Oh, this really struck a chord, Natasa. One of my ...Oh, this really struck a chord, Natasa. One of my sisters is battling cancer right now. This made me weep.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.com