tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post7471310753439485671..comments2024-02-19T21:01:43.522+01:00Comments on Tales of autumn: Poem: Branches of a human heartNatašekhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-46162613783167583872013-06-12T09:36:47.012+02:002013-06-12T09:36:47.012+02:00the light of compassion and hope shines through in...the light of compassion and hope shines through in this poem. :)<br />a powerful piece of work. dsnake1https://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-5508648825194514382013-06-11T21:45:06.883+02:002013-06-11T21:45:06.883+02:00i'm glad you like that line, i was unsure if r...i'm glad you like that line, i was unsure if readers will appreciate it as i've hoped they would.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-41469737593495416802013-06-10T12:33:46.086+02:002013-06-10T12:33:46.086+02:00Love the images expressed in this poem and especia...Love the images expressed in this poem and especially "dreams we swallow making them shine inside of us...." Beautiful!Lisa Williamshttp://law-poetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-3373961930013709882013-06-10T01:39:42.964+02:002013-06-10T01:39:42.964+02:00will the bridges stand strong
under the enraged ri...will the bridges stand strong<br />under the enraged river of our white lies?<br /><br />This is a very strong piece and this line hit me particularly. aka_andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15388010898688586760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-45408513463618338752013-06-09T23:06:15.363+02:002013-06-09T23:06:15.363+02:00I specially like the appreciation and reflection i...I specially like the appreciation and reflection in the ending lines ~<br /><br />Nice to meet you ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-74147385637654074762013-06-09T22:54:15.890+02:002013-06-09T22:54:15.890+02:00 I really enjoyed this line:
will the bridges stan... I really enjoyed this line:<br />will the bridges stand strong<br />under the enraged river of our white lies?<br /><br />Thanks!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-83914191493054658872013-06-09T21:40:04.612+02:002013-06-09T21:40:04.612+02:00indeed, this life is final, we should remind ourse...indeed, this life is final, we should remind ourselves every day, and find beauty in it.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-21268118209698460372013-06-09T21:37:06.389+02:002013-06-09T21:37:06.389+02:00 let our voices find the strength
for those who lo... let our voices find the strength<br />for those who lost the sun...i like the compassion in that...<br />this life is final...and short...we should live it while we have the opportunity...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-52446396117053509442013-06-09T21:05:40.554+02:002013-06-09T21:05:40.554+02:00Yes, the branches of the human heart can spread ne...Yes, the branches of the human heart can spread near and far! Beautiful writing.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-19463381317745993492013-06-09T20:29:43.200+02:002013-06-09T20:29:43.200+02:00I especially love "let our voices find the st...I especially love "let our voices find the strength<br />for those who lost the sun" and <br />"then you'll appreciate the branches of a human heart<br />the vastness of it, spreading<br />through these hearts of ours"<br />Great write!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-12091312658468749322013-06-09T19:44:20.068+02:002013-06-09T19:44:20.068+02:00Very powerful imaginationVery powerful imaginationVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-60074164862262292942013-06-09T17:19:04.200+02:002013-06-09T17:19:04.200+02:00Softly we rant, well done!Softly we rant, well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-19142264290122231002013-06-09T17:02:54.083+02:002013-06-09T17:02:54.083+02:00love the imagery here: very powerful. The idea of ...love the imagery here: very powerful. The idea of branching, roots, streams, connections. Great write!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-88926426420442216442013-06-09T14:08:12.763+02:002013-06-09T14:08:12.763+02:00Very powerful. Nice write.Very powerful. Nice write.Charleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07983825702353264957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-63406518141997400992013-06-09T09:53:58.043+02:002013-06-09T09:53:58.043+02:00"we bruise each other
and admire our scar tis..."we bruise each other<br />and admire our scar tissue<br />babies sleep in their coffins". <br /><br />Very strong poem...Well done Kodjo Deynoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01299996598769756878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-948842741836364444.post-35856384075357987412013-06-09T09:16:40.968+02:002013-06-09T09:16:40.968+02:00Well written and insightful.Well written and insightful.Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.com