in the back
seat of our parents car
we made up
dreams as kids
roll down
your windows
see the
land fall beneath you
as if on a
feather you ride
hundreds of
colourful balloons
each
carrying a piece of your innocent wishes
taking you
on this rollercoaster ride
do you remember
how things felt
seeing them
for the very first time?
and how
parents kept
the
lastness of things a secret
had to
learn on our own
with each
passing place
we found
ourselves at another crossroad
before too
long it's you who takes the wheel
a lone
rider with anywhere to go
chasing god
where starlight kisses the sky
where
sunlight touches the horizon
only the
shadow of a tree marks the passing of time
balloons
burst, one by one
those
innocent wishes making you smile as they rain
when you
find yourself at the crossroads in the night
you realize
as long as you keep dreams awake
you won’t
fall down
with
keeping your promises you make your turn
doesn’t
seem like the first or the last time
*
This was written as a prompt by the mag: link.
I usually give up quickly on prompts, but this one kept going...
Kept the lastness of things a secret...I love that...
ReplyDeletei like the whole concept especially the baloons bursting symbolozing innocence gonig away
ReplyDeletefancy hov ridin'
Innocence is gone too soon.
ReplyDeleteI miss my brother. He's still alive, and we talk very occasionally, but there is much tension between us. We were so close as kids. I doubt we ever will be again. It's heartbreaking to me.
it's interesting to me how siblings, who should be close (they share the same blood, the same genes, the pieces of childhood), grow apart.. some to the point of hate, and the walls they create are too strong. and I agree about the innocence.
DeleteKids and cars? Not always a good combination!
ReplyDeletenot sure what you mean.
DeleteYour poem is lovely .. bringing back memories of all those rides in the car with my parents and two sisters.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful response to the prompt...
ReplyDeletelove this
ReplyDeleteMay all be willing to actually find Him when the time comes.
ReplyDeleteGreat concept of lost dreams being balloons bursting.
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed this one.
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Great collection and I sure wish I could write stories for these pictures!Look how lovely these are. I wish I could draw like this. I will miss you, my sweet friend. Looking forward to when you're back.I really appreciate all your comments, thank you! I’m back behind my desk and hope to start blogging again and catching up with all your lovely blogs in the coming days.............
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I think one of the reasons we can write, Natasa, is because we never lose that childhood joy in all things. We hang onto it.
ReplyDeletethat's a very lovely thought. it might be.
DeleteExcellent piece. Ollie would be proud if he had any idea what was going on
ReplyDelete:) thank you.
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