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| This image was used as album cover for Blind kiss by Head on. |
WAIT FOR ME
I felt your ribs
when we
were slow dancing
drifting through the city
with its dreams painted on the street walls
and I have
mine carved in the halls of my heart
where we
hide our most precious things
I felt you shiver
if your
love is like a sea
I wish your thorax is full of water
draw me – love notes on my skin
till the
fire burns up the bones
and you'll
look for me through fountain eyes
love – till the verge of madness
I lure you
with my words in this game of blindness
we like
to dress in mystery - defining our
morals
you catch me in a moment and blind my eyes with daisies
I know your
voice, it whispers
between
your heartbeats
lose your
lips on me
and wait for me
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This is my 100th post here. Dancing my mini happy dance ;)
Congratulations on your 100th post!! So glad it is here in Poetry Pantry.
ReplyDeleteLove the sensuality of your poem here...the longing, the burning, the love, the whispers! A joy to read!!
Love till the verse of madness ~ Hopefully that blindness leads to genuine admiration ~
ReplyDeleteAnd congrats on your 100th post, a milestone ~
sensuous and loving
ReplyDeletedraw love notes on the skin til fire burns up the bones....wow, nice intensity to that...lose your lips on me...nice,,,,intense passion in your words...blinding with daisies...ha i like that too...smiles.
ReplyDeletebeautiful I just love that first verse.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful 100th post (well, it's a beautiful post no matter its number). "you catch me in a moment and blind my eyes with daisies" - oh, that's a perfect line. I loved this poem.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the sensuality you convey through your use of imagery and rhythm!
ReplyDeleteCongrats on your 100th post, Natasa...!! I loved this passionate piece...so well penned. Beautiful.
ReplyDelete"we like to dress in mystery - defining our morals
you catch me in a moment and blind my eyes with daisies
I know your voice, it whispers
between your heartbeats"-- Wow!!Love this...
Such amazing use of words. To love someone till the verge of madness is something that really remained in my mind after I read this. Got to say, love is best when it is like that.
ReplyDeleteRich and well crafted sensuality here - I enjoyed this Natasa and will be back for more... Regards Scott www.scotthastie.com
ReplyDeleteThis is the kind of poem, I read and wish I had written. It is so beautifully realized and says so much about loving another human being.
ReplyDeleteyou catch me in a moment and blind my eyes with daisies...
What a remarkable line that is.
Congrats on your 100th! I so enjoy your work--and for me, this piece is so well crafted, that I barely notice the work--it just flows for me--beautiful, beautiful work!
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely read and congrats on the 100th. Keep going, before you know it , it will be a thousand:)
ReplyDeleteliquid and languid - nicely penned, Natasa ~ M
ReplyDeletePassionate writing! Happy 100!
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ReplyDeletelovingly crafted!
great imagery, loved "dreams painted on the street walls".
i liked the way you structured the poem. :)
ReplyDeletea nice write up.....enjoyed the lines..
Sensuous, beautiful, wonderful, lovely lovely lovely!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]