Photo by Elena Kalis |
WE
ARE THEIRS
water
bleeds out the reflection of me
my body
can't hide in the blue light
we paint
our bodies, setting milestones in time
in the raw
pocket of the universe
where we've
been for the last minute or two
I crumble
into thousand pieces of regret
searching
for guidelines, to define a purpose
learning
not to let the current drift me away
I breathe
the smell of loneliness
above the
ashes of burned bodies we walk
let us
chase the moon one last time
may the
moonlight tie our hands together
and may the
wild spirits living in our bones
reach out
for the home they once lost
they keep
calling through the depths of fire and flood
-- we are theirs.
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Another prompt by Magpie Tales, for Mag #182. The image and the song Burial at sea by Mono really created the atmosphere from where I could write this.
Hey! Hey! I adore this one. The depth, like water, is intense. "I crumble into thousand pieces of regret" fabulous line!
ReplyDeleteStriking, superb and quite extraordinary.
ReplyDeletewow....really some great elements to this natasa....the spirit in the bones reaching out has to be my fave part...what a mix of emotion as well..the loneliness...raw pocket of the universe....there is a togetherness and not in this that is intriguing...
ReplyDeleteNatasa, this is my first time reading you, thanks to your stopping by my blog. It starts off solitary, then expands into a relationship that has affected her deeply. I love when you did with this ekphrastic prompt, and "the spirit in the bones," reaching out, sang out to me from the screen. You are gifted. Amy
ReplyDeleteI really love the ending wow!!! Very powerful poem we are always searching for meaning for purpose for passion but also peace
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ReplyDeletemy favorite lines are : learning not to let the current drift me away
I breathe the smell of loneliness...so true and so nicely put up.
Oh, I love this. Too many fabulous lines to quote, but there is an intensity here that really sings. Beautiful, Natasa.
ReplyDeleteDark and deep. Well done!
ReplyDeleteSome wonderful imagery here.
ReplyDeletenicely done and thanks for sharing your words
ReplyDeleteI love the last stanza!
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