once we
bled among oceans' waves,
now we
bleed unto paper in covered rooms
your
nocturnal symphonies resonate somewhere deeper
in myself,
as if piano keys were my ribs
raindrops
drifting on the window pane were minutes we had
I heard
butterflies caught in your dreams
and
wondered who will it take to teach them flight?
their
desire was clear in the hour of the wolf
when you
woke up as if it wasn't you who rose up
from that
bed, but your other self, thirsty
for life
without a mask, losing emotion as a price
I remember
how we ran like two deer
away from a
pack of lions, in the pale moonlight
when we
reached the shore, there was no hiding place left
like any
two lovers, we fell into an embrace
laid down into
sand, covered ourselves with fallen leaves
painted our
skins in colours of stones
we were
nowhere to be found
only our
voices whispered between the sea waves
your name
still evokes parts of me
as if it is
etched into my bones
*
Rustic Romantic Wonderful.
ReplyDeletesmiles....so powerful a feel eh that even now it invokes a feeling...yes, i know this...i like the wildness of running like deer...the hearing of butterflies is another really cool touch...along with the piano key ribs.....
ReplyDeleteas usual, the imagery in your poems are top notch. there are great obstacles in love, aren't there? :)
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing the video!
Nostalgic, romantic, and mood-filled write here, Natasa. I really love the final couplet.
ReplyDeletebeautiful, those people who can't escape our memories, still living with us though they may be away.
ReplyDeletewonderfully nostalgic... memories are always important...
ReplyDeleteSensual and romantic at the same time ~ Specially like that third stanza ~
ReplyDeleteHappy Sunday ~
this is just wonderful. beautifully written. and so sensuous too. :<)
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So beautiful comparisons used here:) I especially love the butterflies...
ReplyDeleteYour use of similes is particularly evocative in this exploration of human relationships.
ReplyDeleteYou have written a very beautiful poem.
This reads like a song, Nataša. Lyrical and magical.
ReplyDeleteSuch an evocative piece--I feel so alive after reading it! Beautifully done!
ReplyDeleteI loved the running like two deer from the lions.........a wonderful write, Natasa!
ReplyDeleteWonderful writing, loved the close.
ReplyDelete"we fell into an embrace
ReplyDeletelaid down into sand, covered ourselves with fallen leaves
painted our skins in colours of stones
we were nowhere to be found
only our voices whispered between the sea waves"… gorgeous!
beautiful imagery and a sadness that is palpable in this poem - the music as well... the time of year does this to me too
ReplyDeleteGreat wistful poem Nataša! The third stanza is the one I like best.
ReplyDeleterhythmic cadence and evocative images - a strong write ~
ReplyDelete...bitter-sweet mem'ries & the infinity of longing are deeply felt here... a lovely write... smiles...
ReplyDeleteso evocative and beautiful.....
ReplyDeleteWonderful descriptive write.
ReplyDelete'your name still evokes parts of me
as if it is etched into my bones'
I know this.
Anna :o]
name etched into bones
ReplyDeleteNicely woven poem with nature - powerful ending.
It was so great to read the interview over at Poet's United. Best of luck with book 2
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